tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-20703373361543593552024-02-21T22:47:28.176-08:00Alex MooreAlex takes time out from writing YA fantasy to blog about the joys and angst of writing, the movers and shakers of the writing world, and must-read authors. Grab a cup of joe & join the conversation. She'd love to hear your point of view.Alex Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08019131858093764715noreply@blogger.comBlogger187125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2070337336154359355.post-44835275500117557642009-11-12T05:58:00.000-08:002009-11-12T06:56:23.751-08:00Tipping the Balance: Writing the Query Letter<a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhx4PcboQMiNo5sA9r2KvdXvyb5ym_SUiQq7UXlLZZbhAZp2V9l1BlGAWEka_3BYZe-wnl0TSahK5P47hW_4FbtMjm5oz8g3206x1SlcG9CrgxKW61N1yhkAviNbmg6M62T_4-_3K3auUw/s1600-h/balance.jpg"><img style="MARGIN: 0px 0px 10px 10px; WIDTH: 150px; FLOAT: right; HEIGHT: 106px; CURSOR: hand" id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5403230151558707074" border="0" alt="" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhx4PcboQMiNo5sA9r2KvdXvyb5ym_SUiQq7UXlLZZbhAZp2V9l1BlGAWEka_3BYZe-wnl0TSahK5P47hW_4FbtMjm5oz8g3206x1SlcG9CrgxKW61N1yhkAviNbmg6M62T_4-_3K3auUw/s320/balance.jpg" /></a>For the aspiring writer seeking representation, there's never been a more information-rich environment than now. Blogging agents post exactly what they're looking for, provide examples of query letters, and tweet about their pet peeves. For some writers, this is glorious. For others, overwhelming. <div></div><br /><div>I am not here to provide tips or examples of query letters. Better women than I have done so for you. Sites that I have found particularly helpful include the following: Peruse them, study them, examine them. And, of course, feel free to add more sites or links or advice in the comment section.</div><ul><li><a href="http://pubrants.blogspot.com/2006/08/queriesan-inside-scoop-jana-deleons.html">Kristen Nelson</a>: the rest of the examples are on right-hand side column under <em>Agent Kristin's Queries: An Inside Scoop</em></li><li><a href="http://www.sfwa.org/2005/01/the-complete-nobodys-guide-to-query-letters/">Lynn Flewelling's</a> query letter on the Science Fiction & Fantasy Writers of America <a href="http://www.sfwa.org/">site</a>.</li><li>Both Janet Reid's <a href="http://jetreidliterary.blogspot.com/2004/07/query-letter-checklist.html">blog</a> and her <a href="http://queryshark.blogspot.com/">Query Shark site</a>, which includes the following advice.</li><ul><li><strong>Just so you know: a query MUST contain:</strong></li><li>1. Who is the protagonist?</li><li>2. What choice does s/he face?</li><li>3. What are the consequences of the choice? </li></ul><li><a href="http://www.charlottedillon.com/query.html">Charlotte Dillon's</a> website contains samples as well</li></ul><div>What I would like to do, however, is pass on some advice I garnered from a talk that Catherine Fowler gave at a conference this past year. Although the <a href="http://www.redwoodagency.com/">Redwood Agency</a> is looking for "for high-quality, nonfiction works created for the general consumer market," literary agent <a href="mailto:cathy@redwoodagency.com">Catherine Fowler</a> provides invaluable advice for any author looking for representation.</div><ul><li><strong>Do your research</strong>: know similar titles and prove that there is a market for your work. If you haven't read anything recently, do an Amazon search, then skedaddle to the nearest library. You really do need to know what's going on out there. Don't forget <a href="http://www.poets.org/jdonn/">Donne</a>: No man is an island. </li><li><strong>Read acknowledgements</strong> in similar titles and add to your notes on possible agents or contacts. You might also then reference the book in your query. (Well, unless it's <em>Harry Potter</em> or <em>Twilight</em> or something too obvious.) Agents work hard to get books published, and they don't take on work unless they really believe in it. </li><li><strong>Reference</strong> recent New York Times "hot topic" articles and write, "As evidenced by a recent article..." This lends credence to you and proves you're willing to do the extra work, be informed, and actually care about what's going on in the "real world." Why is this important? Well, as you already know, the writing world is chock full of writing prima donas who insist their novel is "art" and should be taken for what it is: inspiration.</li><li><strong>Compare & contrast</strong>: Yes, you want to prove that there are similar books out there, but you don't want to leave it at that. Twist it around and show what's unique and different. Explain how your Novel Y is like Novel Z, but then elaborate on how it is different.</li></ul><p>Best of luck with your query letter writing endeavors. And do let me know if you've been successful. I'm always up for posting Query Letters that Hurdled the Gate!</p><div class="blogger-post-footer">Join Alex Moore at http://alex-moore.blogspot.com for
scintillating details on the writing world.</div>Alex Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08019131858093764715noreply@blogger.com10tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2070337336154359355.post-4996006341157554182009-10-20T07:17:00.001-07:002009-10-20T07:24:35.199-07:00About those Layers...With references to Hurst's "The Scarlet Ibis", Golding's <em>Lord of the Flies,</em> and even Adam Sandler's <em>Waterboy</em> (1998), I manage to discuss structure, depth, symbolism, and oxygen -- all without breaking a sweat.<br /><br />Join me over at the <span style="font-size:180%;">Adventures in Writing</span> blog today and check out my post on <a href="http://adventures-in-creative-writing.blogspot.com/2009/10/looking-past-surface-depth-beckons.html">Looking Past the Surface: Depth Beckons</a>. In an entirely accidental post, I even give you lines like, "...and now if an oriole sings in the elm, its song seems to die up in the leaves, a silvery dust" (Hurst 1).<br /><br />Ooooh. *shiver* I do love that line.<br /><br />I meant to write about <span style="font-size:180%;">structure</span> for all the NaNoWriMos out there, but depth beckoned...<div class="blogger-post-footer">Join Alex Moore at http://alex-moore.blogspot.com for
scintillating details on the writing world.</div>Alex Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08019131858093764715noreply@blogger.com2tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2070337336154359355.post-89464819373699626242009-10-08T06:00:00.000-07:002009-10-08T07:09:21.278-07:00Mentored Writing<a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiw3yS61HwaTBA_6MWI5PJ3aLAWklNhOmI46Uge_mBpBv1OZng7DRt2FY_dlfxV9ytqyS1y7u1PJfYOqB-NfljVU6YjTiOqV6mvr-qu-I5T7k4jZ6_lHNRk0FCkGr38MkS2z4NC6N_LmF0/s1600-h/obi+wan.jpg"><img style="MARGIN: 0px 0px 10px 10px; WIDTH: 120px; FLOAT: right; HEIGHT: 97px; CURSOR: hand" id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5390229315508412466" border="0" alt="" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiw3yS61HwaTBA_6MWI5PJ3aLAWklNhOmI46Uge_mBpBv1OZng7DRt2FY_dlfxV9ytqyS1y7u1PJfYOqB-NfljVU6YjTiOqV6mvr-qu-I5T7k4jZ6_lHNRk0FCkGr38MkS2z4NC6N_LmF0/s200/obi+wan.jpg" /></a><br />We live in a strange new world where the concept of mentor belongs only in <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Christopher_Vogler">Vogler</a>'s book or in the body and spirit of <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Obi-Wan_Kenobi">Obi Wan</a>. It's part mystery, part mystical, and we don't tend to ask many questions regarding its place in our lives. Why would we? It's only in books, yes?<br /><br />But the idea of apprenticeship has been around a long, long time -- and even today there are fields of work where one becomes an understudy or an apprentice or an intern. My father, who is a union electrician, had to be an apprentice for five years in order to earn the title journeyman.<br /><br />Growth is dependent upon many variables: attitude, awareness, motivation, and, most importantly, exposure to excellence. After all, the great Vince Lombardi once said that practice doesn't make perfect -- only "perfect practice makes perfect." Unless we study, mimic, practice, fail, try again, all on repeat, we never learn to walk. Why would writing be any different?<br /><strong></strong><br /><strong>Acquiring a Mentor:</strong> I'm probably preaching to the choir here, but I whole-heartedly believe that mentorship is a vital part of becoming a better writer. It's important to find someone who is more skilled or experienced since the entire point is growth. (<strong>Caveat</strong>: Choosing someone who is leaps and bounds ahead of you will only frustrate you. Just as a beginning chess player wouldn't sit down to a match with <a href="http://chessup.org/players.html">Bobby Fischer</a>, I wouldn't sit down with <a href="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lois_McMaster_Bujold">Lois McMaster Bujold</a>. I'd probably just quiver uncontrollably as synapses starting shorting.) The paths to finding a mentor are many and varied, and I don't think there is only one way. Below are but a few options.<br /><ul><li>Select authors you admire and study their work.</li><li>Get recommendations from other writers, editors, and agents regarding books on writing.</li><li>Involve yourself with an <a href="http://adventures-in-creative-writing.blogspot.com/">on-line writing community</a> and immerse yourself in the dialogue.</li><li>Join or start a f2f writing group: "as iron sharpens iron"</li><li>Peruse the blog/website of an author who's just been published; they're often willing to share what they've experienced on their own journey.</li></ul><strong>Becoming a Mentor:</strong> (It's a two-way street, baby.) This is probably the less accepted half of the whole mentorship cookie, but I endorse it passionately. It's a widely held belief in the education world that you don't truly learn something <a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiroMqMFzLoBwqerIKaQ0Z91RxfQ4uSnR9t5dwMoZd4L2iU4KMPOQd8Ra_MtU53eYGDx-Ew5xwxCJMAbG30z0kIaOATstSxuFLKlZ8xleXAarD4UG-eSsay15jpjYrxwnCFg4zScH3_B4E/s1600-h/pig.jpg"><img style="MARGIN: 0px 0px 10px 10px; WIDTH: 107px; FLOAT: right; HEIGHT: 116px; CURSOR: hand" id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5390229317374454418" border="0" alt="" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEiroMqMFzLoBwqerIKaQ0Z91RxfQ4uSnR9t5dwMoZd4L2iU4KMPOQd8Ra_MtU53eYGDx-Ew5xwxCJMAbG30z0kIaOATstSxuFLKlZ8xleXAarD4UG-eSsay15jpjYrxwnCFg4zScH3_B4E/s200/pig.jpg" /></a>until you've had to explain it to someone else. Even more than that, however, I believe that within the act of mentoring lies a world of opportunity for everyone involved. Not only are you putting karma chips in your karma piggy bank, but you are learning and growing and developing through the process as well. I know it sounds paradoxical, but it's true. As you mentor, your own ideas, thoughts, and beliefs begin to solidify in a way that defies comprehension. You discover examples that stand as evidence to your knowledge and experience and journey. You also discover your weaknesses and areas of murky understanding. It's powerful.<br /><br />Mentoring starts most often with friendship. And you don't announce that you're the mentor or that you're looking for someone to mentor. That's arrogant and cheesy. Often someone will seek you out. That's what happened in the teaching field for me.<br /><ul><li>On-line social networking: within the same network where you found your mentor, it's like that you can find someone looking for a mentor.</li><li>On-line and Face-to-Face writing groups: there are undoubtedly varying degrees of experience and skill within your own writing group.</li><li>Blogs: it's easy to find aspiring writers and their blogs. <em>Um. Hello. Did anyone find me yet?</em></li></ul>I'm sure there are many more ways that mentors or mentees can be found. Any ideas?<br /><br />To give credit where credit is due, I came across this concept of having and becoming a mentor in my devotions years ago. For those of you familiar with the New Testament, the idea was to find a Paul and a Timothy. The idea stuck with me because it's a powerful one, one that can and should be applied to many areas of our lives. For example, I have certainly chosen a mentor and have chosen to mentor within the education world. It's only made me a better teacher.<br /><br />What is your experience? Do you have a mentor? Do you mentor others?<div class="blogger-post-footer">Join Alex Moore at http://alex-moore.blogspot.com for
scintillating details on the writing world.</div>Alex Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08019131858093764715noreply@blogger.com8tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2070337336154359355.post-82023986152921707032009-10-06T06:22:00.000-07:002009-10-07T07:07:22.648-07:00Tuesday's Post: Same but Different IIDon't forget that on Tuesdays you can find me over at <a href="http://adventures-in-creative-writing.blogspot.com/">Adventures in Writing</a>. Today I write about that ever elusive "<a href="http://adventures-in-creative-writing.blogspot.com/2009/10/same-but-different-part-ii.html">same but different</a>" concept.<div class="blogger-post-footer">Join Alex Moore at http://alex-moore.blogspot.com for
scintillating details on the writing world.</div>Alex Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08019131858093764715noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2070337336154359355.post-25542633301701852992009-09-24T07:07:00.000-07:002009-09-24T07:34:58.085-07:00Meet Linda Weaver Clarke: An Interview<span style="font-size:130%;"><strong>Book Give-Away!</strong></span> <div><div><br /><div><em>[Author's Note: Linda is graciously offering the first book of this series to one of my blog readers! An award-winning novel and a semi-finalist for the Reviewers Choice Award, this is the perfect book for this occasion. In order to be selected, make sure your comment or question for Linda is thought-provoking, pithy, or amusing. <strong>I will select the comment or question on October 1st</strong>.]</em></div><br /><div></div><div><span style="font-size:130%;"><strong></strong></span></div><div><span style="font-size:130%;"><strong>Interview with Linda Weaver Clarke:</strong></span></div><br /><div>I am delighted to announce this special interview with author <a href="http://www.lindaweaverclarke.com/">Linda </a><a href="http://www.lindaweaverclarke.com/">Weaver Clarke</a>! Not only does she provide a look into the research aspect of writing, but she encourages us all to ground our work in the details of life, those experiences unique to us and our circumstances. Thank you, Linda, for taking the time to join us today for this interview.</div><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhdVLC8aixTPp0c0Pvolt_XctSd2Sxl_S-BoA3f_6evZtHFseL6oP5TxAwaDQuVLfFj9jN-351m7jg2LTWqPLY0_PND0oHiP00bw_jmUtknW5BCitco9xeGmBL0lc5h9Grqc_Z_EMqLFk8/s1600-h/Linda2web.jpg"><img style="MARGIN: 0px 0px 10px 10px; WIDTH: 154px; FLOAT: right; HEIGHT: 200px; CURSOR: hand" id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5385041112450613842" border="0" alt="" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhdVLC8aixTPp0c0Pvolt_XctSd2Sxl_S-BoA3f_6evZtHFseL6oP5TxAwaDQuVLfFj9jN-351m7jg2LTWqPLY0_PND0oHiP00bw_jmUtknW5BCitco9xeGmBL0lc5h9Grqc_Z_EMqLFk8/s200/Linda2web.jpg" /></a><br /><div></div><div><strong>Give us a brief overview of your journey as writer into the world of publishing. When did you first realize you wanted to be a writer? How long did it take to finally commit to the dream? How did you eventually get published?</strong> </div><br /><div></div><div>It all started with writing my own ancestors’ biographies. Their experiences were so intriguing that I turned them into a variety of interesting stories for my children to read. After I finished that job, I couldn’t stop writing so I turned to historical fiction. Since my ancestors’ stories were still vivid in my mind, I couldn’t help but add a few of their experiences to my fictional characters. After completing a five-book family saga, I decided to become brave and find a publisher. It took me a year to find one. I was told that was a miracle because it usually takes longer than that for many authors. After signing the contract, I realized my new adventures were just beginning. </div><br /><div></div><div><strong><em><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEj7yfqDj1BcghVyAyX4BqIMW8bsxdSyX8-4Kq3KdX9cIoPmTAADC6LeBd77SvCXzmNzYIymjbL4JJqgZsIrpC09ecGsxym5CoK-Ot3DJMIQNPMnJUGjakrDHaIYoKDjXH5_DCjRu1yGzTY/s1600-h/davidweb.jpg"><img style="MARGIN: 0px 10px 10px 0px; WIDTH: 125px; FLOAT: left; HEIGHT: 200px; CURSOR: hand" id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5385041432688957058" border="0" alt="" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEj7yfqDj1BcghVyAyX4BqIMW8bsxdSyX8-4Kq3KdX9cIoPmTAADC6LeBd77SvCXzmNzYIymjbL4JJqgZsIrpC09ecGsxym5CoK-Ot3DJMIQNPMnJUGjakrDHaIYoKDjXH5_DCjRu1yGzTY/s200/davidweb.jpg" /></a>David and the Bear Lake Monster</em> is your fourth book, I believe. What was the first tickling inspiration for the plot? How long did it take from first impression to final product?</strong> </div><br /><div>Each of my stories surround the Roberts’ family but I always like to add a bit of Idaho history. When I found out about the Bear Lake Monster, I did some digging and found that it was the most interesting part of Bear Lake history. In my research, I found that people really believe in this legend. The mystery of the Bear Lake Monster has been an exciting part of Idaho history ever since the early pioneers. Some people claimed to have seen it and gave descriptions of it. The monster’s eyes were flaming red and its ears stuck out from the sides of its skinny head. Its body was long, resembling a gigantic alligator, and it could swim faster than a galloping horse. Of course, it only came out in the evening or at dusk. Throughout the years, no one has ever disproved the Bear Lake Monster. A bunch of scientists tried to discredit the monster and said it was a huge codfish that was shipped in from the East but could not prove this theory. </div><br /><div></div><div>In 1868, a man by the name of S. M. Johnson was riding his horse alongside the shoreline when he saw an object floating in the water. He figured it must have been a tree until it opened a gigantic mouth and blew water from its mouth and nose. Some time later, a group of twenty people spotted the monster and among these were prominent men of the community. Does the Bear Lake Monster exist? Whatever conclusion is drawn, this Indian legend still lives on and brings a great deal of mystery and excitement to the community. </div><br /><div></div><div>It only took about three months to write. I already knew what my story was about but just needed some Idaho history. That was when I decided to add the Bear Lake Monster. Does David believe in the monster? Of course not! That’s why he’s bound and determined to prove that it doesn’t exist.<br /></div><br /><div><strong>What is the synopsis of the book?</strong> </div><br /><div></div><div>Deep-rooted legends, long family traditions, and a few mysterious events! While visiting the Roberts family, David finds himself entranced with one very special lady and ends up defending her honor several times. Sarah isn’t like the average woman. This beautiful and dainty lady has a disability that no one seems to notice. He finds out that Sarah has gone through more trials than the average person. She teaches him the importance of not dwelling on the past and how to love life. After a few teases, tricks, and mischievous deeds, David begins to overcome his troubles, but will it be too late? Will he lose the one woman he adores? And how about the Bear Lake Monster? Does it really exist? </div><br /><div></div><div><strong>What aspect of <em>David and the Bear Lake Monster</em> are you the proudest of?</strong> </div><br /><div>My research! It was a blast. My great grandmother, Sarah Eckersley Robinson, was my inspiration. I wanted to use her experiences for my heroine to bring some reality into my story. As a child, she lost her hearing but she never let her deafness stop her from living life. I took a lot of her experiences from her biography and gave them to my heroine to bring some reality into my story. Once an intruder hid in her bedroom under her bed, thinking he could take advantage of her since she was deaf. He must have thought she was an easy victim but was sadly mistaken. She swatted him out from under her bed with a broom, and all the way out of the house, and down the street for a couple blocks, whacking him as she ran. What a courageous woman! Because of my admiration for my great grandmother, I named my character “Sarah.” </div><br /><div>In my research about the “hearing impaired,” and talking to a dear friend who became deaf in her youth, I became educated about the struggles they have to bear. It was a surprise to find out that some struggle with the fear of darkness. I didn’t realize that concentrating on reading lips for long periods of time could be such a strain, resulting in a splitting headache. After all my research, I found that I had even more respect for my great grandmother and her disability. What a courageous woman! </div><br /><div></div><div><strong>In your talks and reflections, you have stressed the importance of creating conflict and emotion in writing: What strategies can you offer my readers on these key ingredients to a great plot?</strong> </div><br /><div></div><div>Emotion is the secret of holding a reader. When you feel the emotion inside, so will your readers. By giving descriptions of emotion, it helps the reader feel part of the story as if he were actually there himself. But remember: Show, don’t tell. If a villain challenged your character and he didn’t have a weapon, how did he feel deep down inside? If he were faced with an angry grizzly bear in the wild, how did he react? These are questions that you must research. Read about other people’s accounts, so you can adequately describe your character’s feelings during a situation. </div><br /><div></div><div>Here’s an example. When I was writing <em>Jenny’s Dream</em>, I added Old Ephraim, a ten-foot grizzly bear from Idaho history. He was also known as Old Three Toes because of a deformity on one foot. He was a ferocious beast. He wreaked havoc wherever he went, slaughtering sheep and calves, and scaring sheepherders so badly that they actually quit their jobs. With one blow of his paw, he could break the back of a cow. He bit a thirteen-foot log, twelve inches in diameter, into eleven lengths as though they had been chopped. He also bit off a six-inch aspen limb in just one bite, which was nine feet and eleven inches above the ground. I found that he was the smartest bear that ever roamed the Rocky Mountains. No one could catch him. Every bear trap they set was tossed many yards away from where they had put it, and the ones that weren’t tripped had Old Three Toes tracks all around it. He was too smart to be caught. It took one man that could outsmart this bear: Frank Clark from Malad, Idaho! In this story, I included every detail about this bear and his deeds. Since my story is historical fiction and my hero is Gilbert Roberts, I renamed this grizzly “Old Half Paw,” in honor of “Old Three Toes.” Since I have never been in this situation before, I had to do some research. I learned what it was like to be approached by an angry grizzly by reading people’s accounts, including Frank Clark’s. Conflict makes an interesting story and is hard to put down. The reader wants the hero to win. </div><div></div><br /><div><strong>What writing quirk of yours makes your family smile?</strong> </div><br /><div>I didn’t know the answer to this question so I called my daughter Alaina and asked her. She said, “In all your stories, you have female independence. They don’t take guff from anyone.” My daughter Serena said, “You tend to base your characters on family members and their personality.” </div><br /><div></div><div><strong>How has your family background and/or childhood flavored your writing?</strong> </div><br /><div></div><div>My background has flavored my stories a lot. I was raised on a farm, so adding bits and pieces about farm life was easy for me as I wrote about the Roberts’ family. I could see Jenny dancing in the meadow near her parent’s home, feeling free and unfettered from life’s problems. Since I had done it myself as a child, I could picture Jenny doing this, too. Also, having six daughters has really flavored my stories. I tend to add family experiences to my stories. My daughter Felicia wanted to go fishing with us one day so we took her along. After watching her dad catch one fish after another, she became worried and asked her father to let them go because they were suffering and wanted to be with their family. She even asked me, “How would you feel if you couldn’t see your family ever again?” Then she begged, “Please tell daddy to let them go.” The story was so precious that I added it to my book, “Melinda and the Wild West.” Another time Felicia had tied some pans to her feet and was clomping around the house. The noise was unbearable so my husband said, “Seize and desist from all this noise!” She finally took them off but I just had to add it to my book. Yes, a person’s life does tend to flavor your writing. </div><br /><div></div><div><strong>What advice do you have for published authors who need more exposure or PR assistance?</strong> </div><br /><div>Interviews on radio stations, TV stations, or even on blogs is great. People get to know you as a person and what you write. Let libraries know that your books are available or even give them a book. That’s important because people will read your books at libraries. If they’re interested enough, they’ll buy them. Getting out in the public’s eyes and giving lectures is very important, too. Thank you, Alex. I really enjoyed this interview.</div></div></div><div class="blogger-post-footer">Join Alex Moore at http://alex-moore.blogspot.com for
scintillating details on the writing world.</div>Alex Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08019131858093764715noreply@blogger.com3tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2070337336154359355.post-42456648072532503042009-09-22T07:01:00.000-07:002009-09-22T07:09:30.478-07:00Tackling Eliahna<div>Thank you, everyone, for your brilliant advice regarding the tedious Eliahna. Not only have I (hopefully) resolved this character issue, but I've written about the process (& your help) over on the <a href="http://adventures-in-creative-writing.blogspot.com/2009/09/character-alchemy.html">Adventures in Writing</a> blog.</div><br /><div></div><div>Just a reminder that <strong>every Tuesday</strong> you can find me there -- but don't just visit on Tuesdays. Every day is a treat since each is filled by a different delightful and skilled writer. </div><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgpIjI8Bx4x2NermyjE367Cx1ZtkdMWlS1BeqLjagK8y9dqGttC1mLpKCRvBXz-3uPqV7tweoCFMeWfOaQo41zd-rHE1l8R30z8RkbC2ZEEI2FPcPerK59eu-X7qNFIIyUz3QSa6S7wosI/s1600-h/goblet.jpg"><img style="MARGIN: 0px 0px 10px 10px; WIDTH: 120px; FLOAT: right; HEIGHT: 120px; CURSOR: hand" id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5384293445613928034" border="0" alt="" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgpIjI8Bx4x2NermyjE367Cx1ZtkdMWlS1BeqLjagK8y9dqGttC1mLpKCRvBXz-3uPqV7tweoCFMeWfOaQo41zd-rHE1l8R30z8RkbC2ZEEI2FPcPerK59eu-X7qNFIIyUz3QSa6S7wosI/s320/goblet.jpg" /></a><br /><div></div><div>Here's to you, dear ones. Many, many thanks.</div><div class="blogger-post-footer">Join Alex Moore at http://alex-moore.blogspot.com for
scintillating details on the writing world.</div>Alex Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08019131858093764715noreply@blogger.com1tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2070337336154359355.post-34416918919636403382009-09-17T19:03:00.000-07:002009-09-17T19:24:30.893-07:00Ennui: Writer StyleOkay, so I don't talk about my WIP so much, but I do want to ask a question of all the lovely writers meandering through this blog on occasion:<br /><br /><span style="font-size:180%;">Do you ever tire of a character?</span><br /><br />See, I've a highly organized WIP, which means I've been planning and strategizing and outlining (while still leaving room for creativity, I assure you) for great deal of time. When I finally started writing the novel, it poured forth. It's still pouring forth. (*Knock on wood*) Life is good; no complaints.<br /><br />Except for Eliahna. She is vital to the plot. But every time I write a scene with her in it, I feel careless, bored, like I don't want to write. Every other scene writes itself. Scenes with the dear girl plod along -- I can barely make a thousand words in a sitting.<br /><br />Have you ever experienced something like this? What did you do? Did you plow through or throw her out? Any suggestions?<br /><br />In the meantime, I think I'm going to beat her up rather badly so that I at least feel sorry for her...<div class="blogger-post-footer">Join Alex Moore at http://alex-moore.blogspot.com for
scintillating details on the writing world.</div>Alex Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08019131858093764715noreply@blogger.com15tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2070337336154359355.post-90749407888799222172009-09-11T06:00:00.000-07:002009-09-11T06:37:38.838-07:00I Am a First Responder<div><em><span style="font-size:130%;">In pace leones, in proelio cervi.</span></em></div><div><span style="font-size:130%;">In peace, they are lions; in battle, deer.</span></div><br /><div></div><div>I fell in love with today's Latin proverb (provided by the ever-gracious <a href="http://audiolatinproverbs.blogspot.com/2007/02/in-pace-leones-in-proelio-cervi.html">Laura Gibbs</a>). I tried to put a positive spin on the pithy thought [peace time brings the regal bearing; battle reveals the deft speed], but in reviewing Gibbs' post on the subject, gravity prevailed. Deer are proverbially cowardly.</div><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhmX5_KAovmnDs-nbNzgp_QprsEnisC-4jwnJlHIZRgj-C5xqap_9pWF8kEH2XNnDheQA4RTdGB_IRV0xXnKz56cbY6QXSlNEJeDQc_ztedY5C2sJnPborLSmV2Z3lMWpzyk2AbANBbOeI/s1600-h/deer.jpg"><img style="MARGIN: 0px 0px 10px 10px; WIDTH: 91px; FLOAT: right; HEIGHT: 137px; CURSOR: hand" id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5380202998414297538" border="0" alt="" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhmX5_KAovmnDs-nbNzgp_QprsEnisC-4jwnJlHIZRgj-C5xqap_9pWF8kEH2XNnDheQA4RTdGB_IRV0xXnKz56cbY6QXSlNEJeDQc_ztedY5C2sJnPborLSmV2Z3lMWpzyk2AbANBbOeI/s320/deer.jpg" /></a><br /><div></div><div>If you know anything about deer (in the forest; not those populating your lawn, nibbling your begonias, or whatever they do in (sub)urban areas), you know they're skittish beyond belief. They'll blow and dart away --> if they're bucks -- those great regal creatures with the curving, pointed antlers -- they blow once, maybe twice, and then scram for the next county. Maybe even the next state. If they're does, they'll blow a dozen times, run, stop, turn around, and blow some more, before running off for the hinter lands.</div><br /><div></div><div>This is such typical human behavior. Oh, I pray it's not mine. Makes me think, though. And you? Do you know anyone like this? All bluster, no blow? Can't walk the talk? When push comes to shove, they skedaddle?</div><br /><div></div><div>I don't want to be a writer like this. I don't want to be a human like this. I guess I want to walk softly always, stand strong when duty calls, bend with willow-strength when required.</div><br /><div></div><div>On this day, especially, strength and valor and heroism seem so important, so worthy a goal, so difficult to attain. On this day, especially, I remember those who refused the easy way out, those who did the right thing, the hard thing, the thing which required their all. </div><br /><div></div><div>Anthony is right: the only way to honor such sacrifice is to be a <a href="http://anthony-pacheco.com/2009/09/11/you-are-the-first-responder/">first responder</a>.</div><div class="blogger-post-footer">Join Alex Moore at http://alex-moore.blogspot.com for
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scintillating details on the writing world.</div>Alex Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08019131858093764715noreply@blogger.com5tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2070337336154359355.post-60116373853218533212009-08-25T18:07:00.000-07:002009-08-25T18:20:17.657-07:00Query Letter Blues<a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhcpBian-kyaIkdUTWuBdteOvftmj3kElH7qaAVIPwSYhi7BvM53jV77DLMUW5FVS5W7XwGptpltQP-36dGOmjGu8dP041Dd1gRTHfWYKPPHVkJ37mTIbk3OKkwx1F21SdMBUKXCslmDrM/s1600-h/question.jpg"><img style="MARGIN: 0px 10px 10px 0px; WIDTH: 127px; FLOAT: left; HEIGHT: 84px; CURSOR: hand" id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5374075899025884962" border="0" alt="" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhcpBian-kyaIkdUTWuBdteOvftmj3kElH7qaAVIPwSYhi7BvM53jV77DLMUW5FVS5W7XwGptpltQP-36dGOmjGu8dP041Dd1gRTHfWYKPPHVkJ37mTIbk3OKkwx1F21SdMBUKXCslmDrM/s320/question.jpg" /></a> C<strong>onfession Time:</strong> I've come to the conclusion that my query letter sucks. <div></div><br /><div>As detailed in an earlier post, <a href="http://www.elizabethlyon.com/">Elizabeth Lyon</a> holds to the 30% rule: if you don't net a 30% return on your queries, re-write the dang thang. After all, it's your query letter that stinks, not your novel...</div><br /><div></div><div>So, I've sent out 10 queries, and I've received four polite, kind, and professional rejections so far. The good news is that the turn-around time was pretty swift. The other good news is that I haven't yet received the full 10. And the final good news is that when I've received that eighth rejection, I'll know that I need to re-write my query.</div><br /><div></div><div>In the mean-time, I'm contemplating posting my query here and asking for your professional opinions. On the other hand, I'm not certain how that would be perceived in the publishing world -- and although I am a newbie, I don't want to act like an amateur...especially if there are negative consequences for such openness.</div><div> </div><div>What to do?</div><div class="blogger-post-footer">Join Alex Moore at http://alex-moore.blogspot.com for
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I'm not talking about taking your car in for an oil change. (Hmmm...that reminds me...) I'm talking about New Year's Resolutions. <div><div><div></div><br /><div>What? in August? </div><div></div><div></div><br /><div>Hear me out :)</div><div></div><br /><div>Every January, whether formally or informally, written in ink and signed in blood or off-the-cuff, wink-wink, here's-what-I'm-thinking brain clouds, most of us resolve to be better people. Some of us are even serious about it. Although cliched and hyped, the truth is simple: reflecting upon <em>where we've been</em> and <em>where we are</em> and <em>where we want to be</em> helps us to achieve our goals.</div><br /><div></div><div>So where are you? Come January, many writers resolve to be better writers. Or send out 100 queries. Or land a book deal. Or pound out 1000 words a week. And you? What was your New Year's Resolution?</div><div></div><br /><div>I, on the other hand, made no writerly goal. At least not one I put into print. Instead, I decided that I wanted a six-pack.</div><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjMe1dY1ePJAPobqo4WTjdbZjt6-gAlsb7590sQnPLIBQRbpOx_XqVKERTUvuT9C3-EFEhGi_7w0GAwzaCdDX59fbzObqSZFokdYGsOxbCmber90sxl8xOpGBcap3JoqmsjuZ7uul31Z2E/s1600-h/abs"><img id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5369165521971705666" style="FLOAT: right; MARGIN: 0px 0px 10px 10px; WIDTH: 104px; CURSOR: hand; HEIGHT: 104px" alt="" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjMe1dY1ePJAPobqo4WTjdbZjt6-gAlsb7590sQnPLIBQRbpOx_XqVKERTUvuT9C3-EFEhGi_7w0GAwzaCdDX59fbzObqSZFokdYGsOxbCmber90sxl8xOpGBcap3JoqmsjuZ7uul31Z2E/s200/abs" border="0" /></a><br /><div></div><div>Sadly, I must publicly admit that I will not be posting my own abs this coming January, as previously indicated. Looking on the bright side, I am maintaining a decent exercise program and spending a great deal of time hiking or in the gym. Life is good.</div><div></div><br /><div><strong>But Why do Resolutions Fail?</strong> Here are some of my thoughts.</div><br /><div></div><div><strong>1.</strong> <strong>We don't set realistic goals: </strong>Actually, it's not the goal that's the problem. It's the fact that often we don't set up a series of mini-goals that lead to the ultimate goal. Creating a series of steps allows us to have regular victories, each one ensuring that we're one step closer to the goal. I didn't really do that: I simply created a work-out schedule that would lead me where I wanted to go -- but I didn't pre-determine any mini-goals or time limits.</div><br /><div></div><div><strong>2. We don't check in: </strong>Unless we set up regular and scheduled check points, assessing our growth and course of action, it's easy to get distracted. Formal or informal, it doesn't matter -- all that matters is that we consciously ask ourselves, <em>Where am I in relation to my goal? What do I need to do in order to get back on the path or make the next mini-goal milestone? </em>When I caught the flu last winter, I took two weeks off the gym and rested up. Although I got back into the gym afterwards, I wasn't as focused or as clear about my goal. <strong>I began to lose sight</strong> of why I had created the goal in the first place.</div><br /><div></div><div><strong>3. We self-destruct: </strong>Creating and maintaining a six-pack is hard work. Although I'm active and love the outdoors, I hate core work. And what did I do? I chose a resolution that would challenge everything I knew about myself. When the going got tough during those first few months, I'd give myself pep talks. But after awhile, and after the bout of flu, I started talking to myself like this: <em>why do you want a six-pack? Who will even see it? After all, you don't wear revealing clothing. Why are you torturing yourself? You hate ab work. Hubby is so not worth a six-pack.</em> I forgot why I wanted a six-pack and I convinced myself that it wasn't worth the time or effort. <strong>My work out mantra went something like</strong>: I hate this, i hate this, ihatethis, ihatethis. Not particularly effective self-talk, if you get my drift.</div><br /><div></div><div><strong>4. We are sabotaged: </strong>Either intentionally or unintentionally, our biggest fans are sometimes our biggest roadblocks. Ask anyone who's trying to lose weight: family, friends, and co-workers bring in snacks and always say, "Oh it's not going to make a difference. Take a bite." In the writerly world? "Oh come on, let's go to the movies: you can write later." Or, like my dear husband: <em>A Six-Pack?</em> *incredulous look* <em>Wow, honey. That's a lot of hard work. Do you think you can accomplish that in a year?</em> And, respecting my weight-lifter, totally hunky husband, I began to doubt myself and and my goal. <strong>Please understand</strong>: I do not lay blame at his feet; I simply think that it's important to be aware of possible but loving saboteurs...and then continue on our way.</div><div></div><br /><div>So where are you? If you created New Year's Resolutions, how close are you to fulfilling them? Are you on schedule? Off the track? Thinking, "What Resolutions?"</div></div></div><div class="blogger-post-footer">Join Alex Moore at http://alex-moore.blogspot.com for
scintillating details on the writing world.</div>Alex Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08019131858093764715noreply@blogger.com5tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2070337336154359355.post-33218728829607033552009-08-11T12:32:00.000-07:002009-08-11T13:12:27.838-07:00WIP: To Discuss or Not to Discuss<div>[<em>Author's Note: This post does not refer to pitching agents, practicing your pitch with fellow pitchers, or working out a complicated plot issue with a trusted colleague. It's really about yapping on, ad nauseum, about one's WIP. Seriously.</em>]</div><div></div><br /><div><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEj3f_PZfAKHx3loTvZYT2uNJJXbd0QCVrDXlDT8u42MVEEVLmTYnCADfQPEbopLm86Fy2tInvlUrMGAOI2Ceq2JIl6JXUApw4NCzQd_YAACoOlzZW7Xn8M06Sa1-vo5dgQgA2ONq6YEyHo/s1600-h/heart"><img id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5368801020371067842" style="FLOAT: left; MARGIN: 0px 10px 10px 0px; WIDTH: 111px; CURSOR: hand; HEIGHT: 100px" alt="" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEj3f_PZfAKHx3loTvZYT2uNJJXbd0QCVrDXlDT8u42MVEEVLmTYnCADfQPEbopLm86Fy2tInvlUrMGAOI2Ceq2JIl6JXUApw4NCzQd_YAACoOlzZW7Xn8M06Sa1-vo5dgQgA2ONq6YEyHo/s200/heart" border="0" /></a>Ever notice how two people in love just shimmer with it? They're completely attuned to one another; every thought, every caressing glance, every breath -- all ions, in fact -- reach toward their core of love. Even separated, their bodies turn toward each other, photosynthesis on steroids.</div><br /><div></div><div>And when separated, the only conversation worth having revolves around the beauty or amazingness or dipped-in-AwesomeSauce-specialness of this Love.</div><div></div><br /><div>I imagine each of us is equally in love with our WIPs. Or obsessed, as the case may be. It calls to us when we're driving down the street or washing dishes or playing Scrabble. Characters whisper sweet dialogue into our writer's ear. Plots thicken like grandma's gravy.</div><br /><div></div><div>So just as lovers often do, we're tempted to talk about our passion. </div><div></div><br /><div>And I'm reminded of my father telling me once that what is beautiful to one person is sordid to another. I think it was his attempt to cover that birds & the bees thing without getting too specific. <strong>But what sticks with me is this concept</strong>: just because I'm enamored with <insert>doesn't mean anyone else wants to hear about it.</div><br /><div></div><div>When <a href="http://adventures-in-creative-writing.blogspot.com/2009/08/do-you-discuss-work-in-progress.html?showComment=1250018988610#c7777487580449026178">Douglas posted on our team blog</a> about discussing one's WIP, I realized that when it comes down to it, I choose not to talk. Even when pressed, I tend to deflect the questions or change the conversation. I do this for several reasons, none of which are necessarily right -- just right for me.</div><br /><div></div><div><strong>Why I Don't Discuss My WIP</strong></div><div></div><br /><div>1. <strong>It's Unprofessional:</strong> I first heard this at a conference, but it rings true for me. If you run into an oft-published author, she won't rattle on about the intricacies of her latest plot. Why would she? She wants you to buy the dang book. And, frankly, it's boring trying to follow someone's retelling of a story. Contrary to what you may have heard, I have little desire to bore those I meet. <em>Talking about the craft of writing</em>, on the other hand, is a time-honored tradition. Chat away.</div><div></div><br /><div>2. <strong>It May Jinx My Work: </strong>I don't tend to be superstitious, but I have noticed that once I discuss something plot-related, my energy fizzles. I've already told the story, so why take the time to write it down? It may seem a bit amateurish, but it's the truth. I don't like talking because then the magic is gone.</div><div></div><br /><div>3. <strong>It's Freaky:</strong> I've met writers who freak me out. They talk about their characters as if they're real people, like they've just sat down to dinner with them. Some even talk about how demanding their characters are and how they know the story is finished because so-and-so isn't visiting anymore. Alrighty then. It's all well and good to get into the work; it's an entirely different thing to require psychiatric care. My philosophy? If writing is your therapy, great. Just don't share it.</div><div></div><br /><div>So those are my rules. What works for you? What doesn't?</div><div class="blogger-post-footer">Join Alex Moore at http://alex-moore.blogspot.com for
scintillating details on the writing world.</div>Alex Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08019131858093764715noreply@blogger.com13tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2070337336154359355.post-15147689654985755462009-07-01T09:46:00.000-07:002009-07-01T10:12:00.016-07:00Structure Redux<a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhsfrj-D1Js4AV00QZTIsutihkiLks9fbImaMzhMvHtRxkPUOE4sabMBaZ2Yz1EnMIx7nZK-ip-KeGaXsjx-eriEF3b9xDfcKkWZ5D_GVm099LFVcSxCVtAi2pRbKldv8_hFmMiRw1uQfA/s1600-h/pond"><img id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5353539312994148082" style="FLOAT: left; MARGIN: 0px 10px 10px 0px; WIDTH: 200px; CURSOR: hand; HEIGHT: 200px" alt="" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhsfrj-D1Js4AV00QZTIsutihkiLks9fbImaMzhMvHtRxkPUOE4sabMBaZ2Yz1EnMIx7nZK-ip-KeGaXsjx-eriEF3b9xDfcKkWZ5D_GVm099LFVcSxCVtAi2pRbKldv8_hFmMiRw1uQfA/s200/pond" border="0" /></a><br /><div>Water stagnates. That's why it must be refreshed by an incoming source, and often, relieved through an outlet. Check out your local mud puddle or pond or size-challenged lake. Scum floats, slimy clogs of muck grow up from the bottom, and the water is clouded, full of silt and algae and general yuck.</div><br /><div></div><div>By contrast, add movement or a brisk water source, and you are rewarded with fresh, clear water, good for drinking or irrigating or fishing or meditating.</div><div></div><br /><div>I'm not sure how far I can carry this analogy, but my point is this: the writing community -- the writer's mind -- must continually be renewed. There are many ways, all of which have undoubtedly been discussed a million different times by various bloggers far more talented than I. My favorite renewal is via discussion and contemplation of those topics nearest and dearest a writer's heart.</div><br /><div></div><div>So I just want to reach out to <a href="http://theinnocentflower.blogspot.com/">Lady Glamis</a> and thank her for stirring the waters a bit in her latest post. My writerly self has succumbed to summer temptations and obligations, but this <a href="http://theinnocentflower.blogspot.com/2009/06/string.html">post on structure</a> started me thinking things through again...reminded me why I was thinking the things I was thinking and where I wanted to go with those thoughts. If you haven't checked out her blog or this particular post, trot on over. It's well worth your time.</div><br /><div></div><div><strong>Special Bonus:</strong> I am excited and delighted to say that <a href="http://invisibleinkblog.blogspot.com/">Brian McDonald</a> dropped by her blog and commented a couple of times on the post! You'll have to mull over his additional insight and examples; he really is a master at this whole storytelling thing.</div><div class="blogger-post-footer">Join Alex Moore at http://alex-moore.blogspot.com for
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scintillating details on the writing world.</div>Alex Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08019131858093764715noreply@blogger.com9tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2070337336154359355.post-81334023502725227542009-05-28T06:47:00.001-07:002009-05-28T06:51:59.813-07:00Synopsis ReduxIf you haven't already checked out my <a href="http://adventures-in-creative-writing.blogspot.com/2009/05/synopsis-struggles.html">post on writing the synopsis</a> over at our team blog, <strong>Adventures in Writing</strong>, stop by.<br /><br />It's not the post that's so fascinating, it's the dialogue in the comments section that you might find interesting, even helpful. And, truthfully? I'm looking forward to whatever further thoughts or insights you might add.<div class="blogger-post-footer">Join Alex Moore at http://alex-moore.blogspot.com for
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scintillating details on the writing world.</div>Alex Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08019131858093764715noreply@blogger.com12tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2070337336154359355.post-88916450816733863882009-05-20T17:41:00.000-07:002009-05-20T18:15:33.805-07:00The Last Sentence I Just Wrote<div><a href="http://www.jesswalter.com/">Jess Walter</a>, author of <a href="http://www.amazon.com/Citizen-Vince-Novel-Jess-Walter/dp/0060394412"><em>Citizen Vince</em></a> among other novels, spoke at the <a href="http://www.writeontheriver.org/">Write on the River</a> keynote. He made us laugh and cry and think and consider our own definitions of success. And he encouraged to set our own standard and to live up to it, ignoring the world's version of "making it." <a href="http://uppington.wordpress.com/">Uppington</a> has a great post on his thoughts and tips for writers <a href="http://uppington.wordpress.com/2009/05/18/what-does-success-mean-to-you/#comment-703">here</a>.</div><div></div><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEh3x10OAyJtECVBSArbigX9jROTYTH7glRj-JRmIUZfM37EO8SfHwpjA7olrPLsN1ETlE93OwmMS47M8DCQZqwM8M-MnOs_CFk5BQ8jPEFkK3EktE0oDfgL6H5YonxYVEqA8-ehb8u83bQ/s1600-h/citizen+vince.png"><img id="BLOGGER_PHOTO_ID_5338078201910572978" style="FLOAT: right; MARGIN: 0px 0px 10px 10px; WIDTH: 53px; CURSOR: hand; HEIGHT: 80px" alt="" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEh3x10OAyJtECVBSArbigX9jROTYTH7glRj-JRmIUZfM37EO8SfHwpjA7olrPLsN1ETlE93OwmMS47M8DCQZqwM8M-MnOs_CFk5BQ8jPEFkK3EktE0oDfgL6H5YonxYVEqA8-ehb8u83bQ/s200/citizen+vince.png" border="0" /></a><br /><div>I looked <em>Citizen Vince</em> up on Google, intending to only read the first several pages. It sucked me right in, the voice gritty and hoarse from too many cigarettes but tinged with freshness, like this layer of oblivious innocence had sorta settled over the top of it.</div><div></div><br /><div>And I read about "solitary figures beneath thought bubbles of warm breath and cigarette smoke" on page 6, and then "Vince looks up to the bar, where Beth is staring at him; she gives him a half smile, then looks to the ceiling, as if she's just let go of a nice thought and is watching it float away like a kid's balloon" on page 11 and I'm thinking, <em>Wow. that is beautiful. simple. and beautiful.</em></div><div></div><br /><div>And then I'm reminded of something he said on Saturday that was equal parts simple and beautiful, profound and quirky. <strong><a href="http://www.npr.org/templates/story/story.php?storyId=6493859">He said</a>, "I tend to like the last sentence I just wrote."</strong> </div><br /><div></div><div>And it clicked for me. You have to love this vocation, but you also have to pour yourself into it, scratch out the imagery and carve out the sensory impressions and sift through thoughts for the perfect word or phrase or syllable. There's more to writing than simply telling a good story. There's a way of writing, a style, a slant that is completely your own, chock full of literary goodness, that must be written. We have to remain true to what sounds right. And smells right. And feels right. Maybe <a href="http://www.blogger.com/profile/00733522067506465785">Patrick's</a> right: maybe we call it <a href="http://adventures-in-creative-writing.blogspot.com/2009/05/genre-headaches-literary-vs-mainstream.html">Litstream</a>.</div><div></div><br /><div><em>Note: <a href="http://books.google.com/books?id=GprmJtuprswC&dq=citizen+vince&printsec=frontcover&source=bn&hl=en&ei=MqcUSpODApbGtAOf3PSNCQ&sa=X&oi=book_result&ct=result&resnum=5">Citizen Vince</a> is not only written in <a href="http://adventures-in-creative-writing.blogspot.com/2009/05/meta-writing-good-bad-and-ugly.html">present tense</a>, of all things, but it also won a 2005 Edgar Award for best novel. Go figure. :)</em></div><div class="blogger-post-footer">Join Alex Moore at http://alex-moore.blogspot.com for
scintillating details on the writing world.</div>Alex Moorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08019131858093764715noreply@blogger.com7tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2070337336154359355.post-81757615847425013932009-05-20T06:54:00.000-07:002009-05-20T07:08:28.264-07:00Splendid PeopleI'm a solitary person by nature. I think a lot of writers are --> we observe, ruminate, critique, consider, write. And write. And write. And write. (Unless you're a <a href="http://adventures-in-creative-writing.blogspot.com/2009/05/meta-writing-good-bad-and-ugly.html">meta-dork</a>, as recently unveiled in <a href="http://anthony-pacheco.com/">Anthony Pacheco's</a> latest team blog post.)<br /><br />But I thoroughly enjoyed meeting up with <a href="http://uppington.wordpress.com/">Uppington</a>, <a href="http://www.blogger.com/profile/00733522067506465785">Patrick</a>, <a href="http://www.blogger.com/profile/10984572932841489282">Dave</a>, and unblogged John at Wenatchee's <a href="http://www.writeontheriver.org/">Write on the River</a> Conference this past weekend.<br /><br />I've lost five minutes of time just sitting here thinking about the conversations and laughs and dinner we shared. And, of course, the critical levels of insight...<br /><br />I have no deep thoughts to offer you today (not that I do any day, now that I think about it) -- just a shout out to awesome and talented people. I'm a better person for meeting each of you. Thank you for that.<div class="blogger-post-footer">Join Alex Moore at http://alex-moore.blogspot.com for
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Now, you have to understand that this interview has been in the works since January 25th...so excitement on my part is to be understood. And those of you who've had the opportunity to "meet" Pike (via her writing or other interviews) can understand why I am so thrilled to have this interview. <div><div></div><br /><div>Another reason I'm giddy is the fact that <strong>you have a chance to win a free ARC of <em>Wings</em>. </strong>All you have to do is leave a comment, question, thought, or kudos for Pike in the comment section and you'll be entered into the giveaway. Ahhh, you lucky ducks!</div><div></div><br /><div><strong>When did you first realize you wanted to be a writer?</strong> </div><div></div><br /><div>I've always written here or there, and I remember inklings of wanting to be an author scattered throughout my childhood. I even have a degree in creative writing! But I think the point at which I really knew I wanted to be a writer was right after my daughter was born and I sat down to write a book, almost on a lark, and I came up with a story that I just adored. And for the first time ever, I realized I actually had enough story to write a whole book! I think the moment that I had that realization is when I truly wanted to be a writer.</div><div><br /><strong>How long did it take to finally commit to the dream?</strong> </div><br /><div></div><div>It took about two years after that. Life got busy and about 100 pages into my first novel, I let it fall by the wayside. But I really committed to writing as a business about two years later when I came up with an idea for another book. I wrote it, edited it, and then sent queries out. That, to me, was the moment of commitment, even though that wasn't the book that I eventually sold. I was committed to making it happen!<br /></div><br /><div><strong>What aspect of <em>Wings</em> are you the proudest of?</strong></div><div> <br /></div><div>I am proudest of the fact that I can honestly tell people that they have never seen faeries like my faeries. My faerie mythos came first with this series. I didn't even have a plot when I sat down to start writing WINGS. (I learned very quickly that I needed a plot, but when I started, I just had the mythos.) It's something I worked really hard on and did a ton of research for and ultimately, it is the part of the story that is always the most difficult to write. Keeping things consistent, coming up with new challenges for Laurel, thinking about ways in which the kind of faerie she is affects her daily life.It's a constant challenge and I am so proud of it! </div><div></div><br /><div><strong>What do you feel is your top writing strength?</strong> </div><br /><div>Dialogue. My editor is always asking for more scenery more description, more character, but she generally loves my dialogue. </div><div></div><br /><div><strong>What writing quirk of yours makes your family laugh?</strong></div><br /><div>I always come up with my best idea in the shower or tub. So I'll be soaping up, get this great idea, and as soon as I can wrap a towel around me, I am out of the tub, dripping wet, running to my husband or mom, depending on where I am, and expounding my brilliant, if soggy, idea. </div><br /><div><strong>You write a lot about your husband, Kenny, on your blog and how he makes your writing better. Can you talk a bit about the importance of an editor versus a rah-rah cheerleader?</strong></div><br /><div>Honestly, I think it's really important to have both. But for me, I really need someone who lives with me and can hash things out face to face, who can be my critique partner. Kenny never lets me get away with "good enough." It *always* has to be the very best I can do. This summer, for example, I wrote my sequel too fast. I was concentrating more on my word count than my plot/pacing/etc. So in the end I had a mess that I was totally ready to send to my agent (which would have been a horrible mistake!) Instead, Kenny read it, sat down with me, and told me it wasn't good enough. Not nearly good enough. And then he made about a zillion notes on the manuscript for me and helped me come up with an outline so I wouldn't get so off track again. It took me longer to do my edits from Kenny than it took me to write the entire book to begin with. But it was so much better. Unbelievably better. When I wrote it originally, I was too excited and wrapped up with WINGS to notice that I was screwing up the sequel. I needed him to pull me out of the clouds. A cheerleader puts you up in the clouds, which is really great! But it takes a true critic to pull you back down and make your work shine.<br /></div><div> </div><div><strong><br />How has being a mother influenced Wings?</strong> </div><br /><div>Wow! No one has ever asked me that before! And I actually do have an answer. I have a great relationship with my mother. I have the kind of relationship that I hope to have with my kids someday. And ultimately, I don't think I am the exception. I think most teenagers have pretty good relationships with their parents. Because of that, I feel like the tendency toward parents being either dead or completely absent in YA books is a little strange, and sometimes off-putting. It's not normal. So I consciously set out to write a book in which the main character has a real relationship with her parents. They are involved in her every day life.<br /></div><br /><div>That doesn't mean she doesn't lie to them like a politician.;) But they are there. I wanted them to be there. Because I wanted to show that having a good relationship with you parents is normal. I want MY daughter to read it someday and feel like the relationship she (hopefully!) has with me is not weird.<br /></div><br /><div>Plus, Laurel's parents are quirky and fun!:)<br /></div><br /><div><strong>What advice do you have for authors seeking representation?</strong></div><strong><br /><div></strong>Two things. First, through the web, authors are more accessible than ever. You can email them and get responses and even become friends! How cool! Don't squander this opportunity by dropping their name when you haven't been given permission. Agents and editors check back on that and if they find out you have used a name without permission, it is an auto-rejection. I'm not saying you can't say, "I'm a fan of So'n'so's work who you represent/edit." But don't say "Famous Author recommended me!" when they didn't. You will get yourself black-balled and lose the author as a friend. You don't need an in, you just need a great story.</div><br /><div>Secondly, (and anyone whose query I have critiqued is going to think this is directed at them, but it's not! I see it happen all the time which is why I am pointing it out.:)) learn how to describe your book using details instead of meaningless dramatic words. I can't tell you how many queries I see that have some permutation of this. "A heart-wrenching saga of love, magic, and adventure!" How many books can you think of that THAT describes? Cuz I can come up with twenty of the top of my head. Phrases like that sound dramatic, but they don't mean anything. No agent is going to steal your plot, so let them have it! Share details! Share twists! Share bad guys! That is what will make an agent ask for more!<br /></div><br /><div>And when you do send that partial or full, please spell check. :)</div><br /><div></div><div>=-=-=-=-</div><br /><div>Many thanks to Aprilynne Pike for an awesome interview! Make sure you leave your comment so that you'll be entered into that free giveaway...</div></div><div class="blogger-post-footer">Join Alex Moore at http://alex-moore.blogspot.com for
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